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Sunday, May 10, 2009

low


long time, many years have past since i felt this low
itz like im in my own little show
feeinl like iv choken
im feelin all broken
diriftin in this liquid pain
going crazy in this emotion riden game
stuck in the middle of this show
traped feeling this low
gota find an end
maybe i should call upon death
then finaly i will be untraped
and this pain can slowly unrap
this pain is just 2 deep
as i watch i the blood seep
day turns to night
the blood stained so bright
still no end to this heartrenching show
this feelin still so low
steering at the satrs upabove
i remember feeling no love
as i stood at the y
listening to all thoughs lies
they called me a star
this just left me with a distent steer, so far
i turned to look at the deep sektch scar
as the women in chav strung her gitar
still this feelin so low
still no end to this show

2 Comments:

At 7:37 pm, Blogger Francisco Castelo Branco said...

Hi

nice blog. Nice pictures and drawns. It is yours??

Very interesting

I have a blog also. The address is www.olhardireito.blogspot.com

It is written in Portuguese but i have google translate tool

Take a look and give a opinion

If you want to show your drawns in my blog, send me a email. The address is franciscocastelobranco99@gmail.com

See you

See you

 
At 10:17 pm, Blogger shaz said...

thanks the picture aren't mine but the poem is my work. x

 

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